Lord,
I feel as though I've lost
my first love.
I've grown cold
and indifferent
to Your voice.
My soul is lost in this lonely place,
a frozen wilderness-
and I don't know where to turn.
Look up, daughter. Just look up.
By Debora Rorvig
Dear friends: Magpie Tales is a site for poets and writers to find inspiration. This week's writing prompt was the photograph shown above. It's a nice way to find new things to write about. http://magpietales.blogspot.com/
4 comments:
Welcome to Magpie! Lovely thoughts.
(For some reason you linked to a post from October of last year, but no worries, I corrected it!)
Thanks Tess! I noticed the crazy link too; but had no idea how to fix it. I appreciate that you were able to.
I liked the last line especially...
It's easy to feel lost, that's for sure. Last line is perfect ending- love your poem, Debora!
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